Articles | Volume 14, issue 2
https://doi.org/10.5194/esurf-14-269-2026
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Experimental study of time-averaged flow and turbulence over asymmetric tidal dunes
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- Final revised paper (published on 24 Mar 2026)
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4883', Sjoukje de Lange, 05 Nov 2025
- RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4883', Anonymous Referee #2, 27 Nov 2025
- CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4883', Tom Coulthard, 27 Nov 2025
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4883', Kevin Bobiles, 26 Jan 2026
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (11 Feb 2026) by Anne Baar
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ED: Publish as is (17 Feb 2026) by Anne Baar
ED: Publish as is (17 Feb 2026) by Tom Coulthard (Editor)
AR by Kevin Bobiles on behalf of the Authors (20 Feb 2026)
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This manuscript presents a high-quality and original study that successfully fills a relevant gap in the current research field. The experimental design is robust, and the data analysis is thorough and convincing. Overall, the scientific contribution is significant. Most of my feedback therefore concerns aspects of writing style, structure, and clarity rather than the scientific content itself. These revisions would enhance readability and ensure that the strength of the work is fully reflected in the text. Below I highlight major concerns, while in the attached pdf I added in-line questions and suggestions.
Title: The title currently includes the phrase “Steady bidirectional flow”, which is conceptually problematic, since a bidirectional flow, which fluctuates between +u_max and –u_max, cannot be steady by definition (as du/dt≠0). Upon reading further, it becomes clear that the authors refer to two separate experimental settings: a steady flow in one direction, and a steady flow in the opposite direction. While this design is valid, the term “steady bidirectional flow” may lead to initial confusion. I therefore recommend removing the word “steady” or rephrasing the title for improved clarity.
Abstract: The abstract contains all relevant information, but its organization could be improved. The current structure appears somewhat disordered, which obscures the central message of the paper. A clearer and more conventional scientific structure is recommended. The sections that I miss or would improve include:
The main findings—especially regarding non-steep dunes, irregular dune shapes, and the importance of leeside angle and steep-face morphology—should be emphasized more clearly. At present, the abstract does not adequately convey the strength and clarity of the paper’s contributions.
Introduction: The introduction reads somewhat unstructured and would benefit from clearer logical progression and stronger narrative coherence. The reader needs more guidance throughout the section: Why is each paragraph or subtopic relevant? How does each section build toward the research question? What is the main message or takeaway from each part?
Additionally, the introduction would be strengthened by including more recent literature, since many references are from 20 years ago, and much progress has been made in the field since then.
Methods and results: These sections are excellent. The analysis is detailed, systematic, and well-executed. The figures and interpretations convincingly support the conclusions. The only thing I would appreciate is a bit more explanation on the quandrant analysis and the interpretation of these results.
Discussion: The discussion is generally well written and organised. It could be expanded slightly to answer three of my remaining questions.
Firstly, it would be valuable to include a short section on implications for the field, addressing how these findings might influence or refine conclusions from previous field studies (e.g., de Lange et al, 2021 (https://doi.org/10.1029/2021WR030329), Prokocki et al., 2022 (https://doi.org/10.1002/ esp.5364), de Lange et al. 2024 (https://doi. org/10.1029/2023JF007340), and others).
Moreover, since the experimental design uses two opposing steady flows to approximate tidal dynamics, it would be useful to reflect on how an actual tidal flow—characterized by gradual acceleration and deceleration—might affect the observed results.
Finally, how would superimposed dunes affect your findings? Could you just add one or two sentence speculating on this? The reason I’m suggesting this is that superimposed dunes are recently found to be very important for sediment transport (I refer to the work of Judith Zomer), and clearly superimposed dunes impact the leeside and steep side angle of the primary dune.