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Summary

In this contribution the authors aim to examine how topography responds to changes in uplift versus climate using the streampower+diffusion landscape evolution model. They specifically focus on how diffusion modulates the response of channel profiles to changes in rainfall rate in the streampower model. They find a nonmonotonic response of channel slope near ridges when precipitation is increased or decreased, which doesn’t appear in the absence of diffusion, or when the uplift rate is changed. They propose that this occurs because diffusion-driven erosion is unaffected by change in precipitation, inducing a local change in the balance of advection versus diffusion processes near channel heads. They suggest that this could be a diagnostic feature of response to changes in climate.

While this is an interesting signature that I don’t think has been described before, the authors have missed a few important points that call into question the usefulness of the feature they have described. First, and most importantly, their method relies on the idea that the diffusion term is insensitive to changes in climate. This seems highly unlikely, given that slope stability is sensitive to hydrological processes (Bogaard & Greco, 2016), and other biophysical processes that drive soil production and creep are almost certainly climate-sensitive (Andersen et al., 2015; Gabet, 2000; Gabet & Mudd, 2010). While theories that clearly link hillslope processes to climate are still needed, it is generally accepted that both soil production and the diffusion coefficient increase with mean annual precipitation (Perron, 2017).

A second related issue is distilling the effects of climate change down to a linear increase in average precipitation. Climate change is manifested in changes to the not just the mean, but also the distribution of event magnitudes and the phase (snow, rain) of precipitation due to changing temperature, which will be especially important in mountainous settings such as those considered (Meira Neto et al., 2020). Settings respond to precipitation changes differently depending on the dominant runoff generation mechanisms (Uhlenbrook et al., 2005), which are further modulated by erosion thresholds (DiBiase & Whipple, 2011). Such thresholds are especially important in headwaters, where the authors report their slope effect. Furthermore, geomorphic models that consider vegetation response to climate change suggest that the erosion response to precipitation change could even be reversed due to dynamic feedbacks with vegetation cover and evapotranspiration (Yetemen et al., 2019). None of these processes are mentioned in the present paper.

While I’m unsure that the streampower+diffusion model is the right tool to answer questions of climate sensitivity, I understand the tendency to stick with it in the name of interpretable simplicity. One of the reasons to stick with this model is because of its well-developed nondimensional forms (Bonetti et al., 2020; Litwin et al., 2025; Perron et al., 2008; Theodoratos et al., 2018), which provide clear methods for understanding fundamental process competition. The authors run into the problem of non-uniqueness in process competition when they change the streampower coefficient and diffusion coefficient but maintain their ratio. However, they do not provide any explanation of the fundamental scaling between the two, which is well understood (e.g., Perron et al., 2008).

Overall, I think this paper needs substantial work to become a valuable contribution. My main recommendation would be to engage with models that link changes in climatic, hydrological, and geomorphic processes in some more realistic level of detail. If not, they could describe the deficiencies of the streampower+diffusion model and provide a more comprehensive description of the effect they observe, using available nondimensional frameworks and acknowledging that the diffusion coefficient likely is not constant in response to climate change.

Line-by-line comments

1. Transient slope change reversals are not yet defined.
2. Needs more description of how changes in climate actually yield changes in runoff production. Q=PA is a little too simple.

48-49. Needs better description of what causes diffusion processes, how they might be linked to climate as well.

62-63. Part of the reason this hasn’t been explored is because we don’t have adequate theory describing how the diffusion coefficient changes with climate, although it almost certainly does.

84-86. Needs citation.

91-94. Maybe just describe the processes that are relevant. No marine? Source to sink?

Table 1. Those are really large values of the diffusion coefficient! Usually, find values on the order of 0.001-0.01 m2/yr using hilltop curvature and erosion rates. The sensitivity to the value used is dependent on the grid size, and there are already well-established nondimensional forms that can help describe this (Bonetti et al., 2020; Litwin et al., 2025). It might be useful to consider those.

1. Again, this would be evident if you used established nondimensionalizations.
2. You have not explained why topographic roughness is a useful or interesting metric, or how you are calculating it.

3.2 “rivers’ channel”

Fig. 4 Here it sounds like the effect of diffusion is unimportant, but in subsequent figures, it clearly is important. You could just explain Figure 4 as the kind of null case.

1. “Monotonously”
2. Needs to be more specific.

190-191. Not all channels experience this effect? Is there a threshold where it starts to occur?

192-199. Just a copy of the previous text.

Works cited

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