Articles | Volume 13, issue 5
https://doi.org/10.5194/esurf-13-907-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under
the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.Grain size dynamics using a new planform model – Part 3: Stratigraphy and flexural foreland evolution
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- Final revised paper (published on 15 Sep 2025)
- Preprint (discussion started on 21 Feb 2024)
- Supplement to the preprint
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Status: closed
Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-351', Anonymous Referee #1, 18 Apr 2024
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Amanda Wild, 23 Apr 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-351', Eric Barefoot, 25 Apr 2024
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Amanda Wild, 30 Apr 2024
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AR: Author's response | RR: Referee report | ED: Editor decision | EF: Editorial file upload
AR by Amanda Wild on behalf of the Authors (06 Sep 2024)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (07 Nov 2024) by Kieran Dunne
RR by Anonymous Referee #3 (27 Feb 2025)

RR by Anonymous Referee #4 (08 Apr 2025)

ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (14 Apr 2025) by Kieran Dunne

AR by Amanda Wild on behalf of the Authors (26 May 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (04 Jun 2025) by Kieran Dunne
ED: Publish as is (05 Jun 2025) by Paola Passalacqua (Editor)
AR by Amanda Wild on behalf of the Authors (13 Jun 2025)
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This has been an extremely difficult paper to review. I found the large amount of information contained in the densely written 42 pages with 19 figures overwhelming. Five additional figures are in the appendix and 7 figures in the Supplementary Material. This is too much information for a single manuscript. The research summarized in the paper is thoroughly done and it has the potential to be a truly excellent contribution, but it needs to be presented in a more reader friendly way.
In the conclusion section the authors summarize main findings as follows:
• model formulation with the to incorporate a grain size fining model in a landscape evolution model;
• model testing and validation (not in the conclusion section, but must be written)
• model application to reproduce autogenic processes;
• analysis to show that grain size fining is controlled by a balance between external and internal forcing;
• applications to natural examples
⁃ identification of the stratigraphic signature
⁃ the case of a flexural foreland basin
• discussion on model applicability and limitation
This is clearly material for two solid, stand alone papers. The model, modeling challenges, limitations and verification can be presented in the first paper with some application to reproduce autogenic processes, if and how these processes depend on model parameters. The second paper can then clearly present main results and applications (control on fining, stratigraphic signatures….).
I hope this helps.